Hi me again,
For a writing task in my group this week we have been working on 6 sentence storys, have a look at the image to see what that is. Here is one that I made up:
Once apon a time, there was a young girl that loved to play horses. She lived in a 3 bedroom house and shared a room with her 2 older siblings. Her talent was annoying her 3 siblings. The problem was that her toy horses hair had been washed with human shampoo so had fallen out. She was overwhelmed
with depression because of this. The girl solved this by annoying her siblings so much that they gave
her some money and sent her off to buy some new toys.
The End
Hi Rosie,
ReplyDeleteI really like you poem and it was good to read. I annoy my sister as well.
you said that the sister has 2 siblings and then you say that she has 3 siblings?
Apart from that I enjoyed it
Caitlyn